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He for God only, fhe for God in him:
His fair large front and eye fublime declar'd
Abfolute rule; and hyacinthin locks
Round from his parted forelock manly hung

ear muft judge this alteration to be much for the worfe.

For valor he and contemplation form'd,

For foftnefs fhe and fweet attrac

tive grace.

299. He for God only, fe for God in him:] The author gave

it thus, fays Dr. Bentley,

He for God only, fhe for God and him.

The oppofition demonftrates this, and ver. 440, Eve (peaks to Adam,

O thou for whom

And from whom I was form'd

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Dr. Pearce approves this reading of Dr. Bentley, and to the Proof which he brings, adds X. 150.

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Cluftring,

Euftathius interprets hyacinthin locks by black locks, and Suidas by very dark brown; and Milton in like manner means brown or black locks, diftinguishing Adam's hair from Eve's in the color as well bable the hyacinth among the Anas in other particulars. It is procients might be of a darker color than it is among us.

303. Clufiring,] His hair hung cluftring, or like bunches of grapes, as hers was like the young fhoots or tendrils of the vine. They are oppos'd, you fee, the one to the other. The circumftance of the hair hanging like bunches of grapes, as the ingenious Mr. Warton obferves, has been justly admir'd; but it is literally tranflated from this defcription of Apollo's hair in Apollonius Rhodius. Argon. Lib. 2. ver. 678.

χλεύσεοι δε παρειπων εκάτερθε Πλοχμοι βοτρυοεντες επερρώοντο κιοντι. Aurei ab utraque gena Cincinni racemantes affultabant eunti.

The word βοτρυοντες could hardly be rendered into English by any other word than by cluftring.

303- bis fhoulders bread:) Broad fhoulders are always affign'd to the ancient heroes; in Homer they have supas wes, in Virgil latos bumeris. But I wonder that Milton has given no indication

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Cluftring, but not beneath his shoulders broad:
She as a veil down to the flender wafte
Her unadorned golden treffes wore
Dishevel'd, but in wanton ringlets wav'd,

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an indulgent loose to his fancy; fince the most lavish imagination could not poffibly carry too high the charms of Woman, as the first came out of the hands of her heavenly Maker. But as a picture of this kind would have been too light and gay for the graver turn of Milton's plan, he has very artfully mentioned the charms of her directed the reader's attention more perfon in general terms only, and particularly to the beauty of her mind. Moft great poets have labor'd in a particular manner the delineation of their beauties (Ariofto's Alcina, Taffo's Armida, and Spenfer's Belpheebe) and 'tis very probable that the portrait of Eve would have rival'd them all, if the chafte correctness of our author's Mufe had not restrain'd him.

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As the vine curls her tendrils, which imply'd
Subjection, but requir'd with gentle fway,
And by her yielded, by him beft receiv'd,
Yielded with coy fubmiflion, modest pride,
And sweet reluctant amorous delay.

Nor those mysterious parts were then conceal'd,
Then was not guilty shame, dishonest shame
Of nature's works, honor difhonorable,
Sin-bred, how have ye troubled all mankind

the taste of the Ancients in other things, fo likewife in this particular. He must certainly have preferred this to all other colors, or he would never have bestowed it upon Eve, whom he defign'd as a pattern of beauty to all her daughters. And poffibly he might at the fame time intend à compliment to his wife; for I remember to have heard from a gentleman who had feen his widow in Chefhire, that fhe had hair of this color. It is the more probable, that he intended a compliment to his wife in the drawing of Eve; as it is certain, that he drew the portrait of Adam not without regard to his own perfon, of which he had no mean opinion.

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which imply'd Subjection,] The poet manifeftly alludes to St. Paul's first Epistle to the Corinthians, Chap. XI. Doth not even nature itself teach you (fays the Apoftle) that if a man have

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long hair, it a fhame unto him? and therefore Milton gives Adam locks, that hung cluftring, but not beneath his fhoulders broad. But if a woman have long hair (continues the Apostle) it is a glory to her, for her hair is given her for a covering or veil as it is render'd in the margin: and therefore our author gives Eve very long hair, he wore her golden treffes as a veil down to the flender waste. And this long hair the Apostle confiders as an argument and token of her fubjection, a covering, a veil, in fign that the is under the power of her husband; and for the fame reafon the poet fays that it imply'd fubjection: such excellent ufe doth he make of the facred Writings. The poet adds that this fubjection was requir'd by him with gentle fway, and yielded by her, but it was beft receiv'd by him, when yielded with coy fubmiffion, modeft pride, and feet reluc tant amorous delay, which is ex

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With shows instead, mere fhows of feeming pure,
And banish'd from man's life his happiest life,
Simplicity and spotless innocence!

So pass'd they naked on, nor fhunn'd the fight
Of God or Angel, for they thought no ill :
So hand in hand they pass'd, the loveliest pair
That ever fince in love's embraces met;
Adam the goodlieft man of men fince born
His fons, the fairest of her daughters Eve.

prefs'd with more elegance than that admir'd paffage in Horace, which no doubt Milton had in his thoughts, Od. II. XII. 26.

-facili fævitia negat Quæ pofcente magis gaudeat eripi, Interdum rapere occupat.

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314. bonour dishonorable,] He alludes to 1 Cor. XII. 23. And thofe members of the body which we think to be lefs honorable, upon these we befow more abundant honor. But the honor paid to thofe parts is really a dishonor, a token of our fall, and an indication of our guilt. Innocent nature made no fuch diftinction. Sin-bred, how have ye troubled &c. Should we not read,

Sin-bred, how have you troubledfor what is he speaking to befides

Shame ?

323. Adam the goodliest man of men &c.] Thefe two lines are cenfured by Mr. Addifon, and

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are totally rejected by Dr. Bentley, as implying that Adam was one of his fons, and Eve one of her daughters: but this manner of expreffion is borrow'd from the Greek lan

guage, in which we find fometimes the fuperlative degree ufed inftead of the comparative. The meaning therefore is, that Adam was a goodlier man than any of his fons, and Eve fairer than her daughters. So Achilles is faid to have been ωκυμορώτατος αλλων Iliad. I. 5o5. that is more fhort-liv'd than others. So Nireus is faid to have been the handfomeft of the other Grecians, Iliad. II. 637.

τός καλλις ανηρ ύπο Ιλιον ήλθε,

Των αλλων Δαναών,

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Under a tuft of fhade that on a green
Stood whisp'ring soft, by a fresh fountain fide
They fat them down; and after no more toil
Of their sweet gard'ning labor than fuffic'd
To recommend cool Zephyr, and made ease
More easy, wholsome thirst and appetite
More grateful, to their fupper fruits they fell,
Nectarin fruits which the compliant boughs
Yielded them, fide-long as they fat recline
On the foft downy bank damask'd with flowers:
The favory pulp they chew, and in the rind
Still as they thirsted scoop the brimming stream;
Nor gentle purpose, nor endearing fmiles

of the Tyndaridæ, but more brave than any of them. And as Dr. Pearce obferves, fo Diana is faid by one of the poets to have been comitum pulcherrima, not one of her own companions, but more handfome than any of them. And I believe a man would not be corrected for writing falfe English, who should fay the most learned of all others, inftead of mere learned than all others.

337. Nor gentle purpofe, &c.] This alfo from Spencer, Faery Queen, B. Cant. 8. St. 14.

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He 'gan make gentle purpofe to his dame.

B. 1. Cant. 2. St. 30.

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Wanted,

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