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So much for obviating the objections which are frequently raised against such remarks as I have already made, and shall probably hereafter make, on the subject of language. The elements which enter into the composition of the hugest bodies, are subtile and inconsiderable. The rudiments of every art and science exhibit at first, to a learner, the appearance of littleness and insignificancy. And it is by attending to such reflections as to a superficial observer would appear minute and hypercritical, that language must be improved, and eloquence perfected*.

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I return to the causes of obscurity, and shall only further observe, concerning the effect of bad arrangement, that it generally obscures the sense, even when it doth not, as in the preceding instances, suggest a wrong construction. Of this the following will suffice for an example: "The young man did not want natural ta"lents; but the father of him was a coxcomb, who af"fected being a fine gentleman so unmercifully, that he "could not endure in his sight, or the frequent mention "of one, who was his son, growing into manhood, and thrusting him out of the gay world f." It is not easy to disentangle the construction of this sentence. One is at a loss at first to find any accusative to the active verb endure; on further examination it is discovered to have two, the word mention, and the word one, which is here closely combined with the preposition of, and makes the regimen of the noun mention. I might observe also the vile application of the word unmercifully. This, together with the irregularity of the reference, and the intricacy of the whole, renders the passage under consideration, one of those which may, with equal justice, be ranked under solecism, impropriety, obscurity, or inelegance.

PART III.-From using the same word in different senses.

Another source of obscurity, is when the same word is in the same sentence used in different senses. This

• The maxim Natura se potissimum prodit in minimis, not confined to physi ology. + Spect. No. 496. T.

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error is exemplified in the following quotation: "That "he should be in earnest it is hard to conceive; since any reasons of doubt, which he might have in this case, "would have been reasons of doubt, in the case of other "men, who may give more, but cannot give more evident, signs of thought than their fellow creatures *." This errs alike against perspicuity and elegance; the word more is first an adjective, the comparative of many; in an instant it is an adverb, and the sign of the comparative degree. As the reader is not apprized of this, the sentence must appear to him, on the first glance, a flat contradiction. Perspicuously either thus, " who

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may give more numerous, but cannot give more evi"dent signs," or thus," who may give more, but cannot give clearer signs."

It is but seldom that the same pronoun can be used twice or oftener in the same sentence, in reference to different things, without darkening the expression. It is necessary to observe here, that the signification of the personal, as well as of the relative pronouns, and even of the adverbs of place and time, must be determined by the things to which they relate. To use them, therefore, with reference to different things, is in effect to employ the same word in different senses; which, when it occurs in the same sentence, or in sentences closely connected, is rarely found entirely compatible with perspicuity. Of this I shall give some examples. "One

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may have an air which proceeds from a just sufficiency " and knowledge of the matter before him, which may "naturally produce some motions of his head and body, "which might become the bench better than the bar." + The pronoun which is here thrice used in three several senses; and it must require reflection to discover, that the first denotes an air, the second sufficiency and knowledge, and the third motions of the head and body. Such is the use of the pronouns those and who in the follow

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prey upon the inadvertency of young heirs, are more pardonable than those, who trespass upon the good "opinion of those, who treat with them upon the foot "of choice and respect."* The same fault here renders a very short sentence at once obscure, inelegant, and unmusical. The like; use of the pronoun they in the following sentence, almost occasions an ambiguity: "They were persons of such moderate intellects, even before they were impaired by their passion +."-The use made of the pronoun it in the example subjoined, is liable to the same exception: "If it were spoken with never so great skill in the actor, the manner of uttering that sentence could have nothing in it, which could "strike any but people of the greatest humanity, nay, people elegant and skilful in observations upon it ‡.” To the preceding examples I shall add one wherein the adverb when, by being used in the same manner, occasions some obscurity: "He is inspired with a true "sense of that function, when chosen from a regard to "the interests of piety and virtue, and a scorn of what"ever men call great in a transitory being, when it comes "in competition with what is unchangeable and eter"nal §."

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PART IV. From an uncertain reference in pronouns › and relatives.

A cause of obscurity also arising from the use of pronouns and relatives, is when it doth not appear at first to what they refer. Of this fault I shall give the three following instances: "There are other examples," says Bolingbroke," of the same kind, which cannot be brought without the utmost horror, because in them it is sup"posed impiously, against principles as self-evident as any of those necessary truths, which are such of all "knowledge, that the supreme Being commands by one

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* Guardian, No. 73.

+ Spec. No. 30. § Guardian, No. 13.

Ib. No. 509.

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"law, what he forbids by another." * It is not so clear as it ought to be, what is the antecedent to such. Another from the same author, "The laws of Nature are truly what my Lord Bacon styles his aphorisms, laws "of laws. Civil laws are always imperfect, and often "false deductions from them, or applications of them; nay, they stand in many instances in direct opposition to them." It is not quite obvious, on the first reading, that the pronoun them in this passage, doth always refer to the laws of Nature, and they to civil laws. "When "a man considers the state of his own mind, about which "every member of the Christian world is supposed at "this time to be employed, he will find that the best "defence against vice, is preserving the worthiest part "of his own spirit pure from any great offence against it." It must be owned that the darkness of this sentence is not to be imputed solely to the pronoun.

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PART V.-From too artificial a structure of the
Sentence.

Another cause of obscurity is when the structure of the sentence is too much complicated, or too artificial; or when the sense is too long suspended by parentheses. Some critics have been so strongly persuaded of the bad effect of parentheses on perspicuity, as to think they ought to be discarded altogether. But this, I imagine, is also an extreme. If the parenthesis be short, and if it be introduced in a proper place, it will not in the least hurt the clearness, and may add both to the vivacity and to the energy of the sentence. Others, again, have carried their dislike to the parenthesis only so far as to lay aside the hooks by which it is commonly distinguished, and to use commas in their place. But this is not avoiding the fault, if it be a fault, it is only endeavouring to commit it so as to escape discovery, and may therefore be more justly denominated a corruption in writing than an improvement. Punctuation, it will

• Bolingb. Phil. Fr. 20.

+ Ib. Fr. 9.

Guardian, No. 19.

readily be acknowledged, is of considerable assistance to the reading and pronunciation. No part of a sentence requires to be distinguished by the manner of pronouncing it, more than a parenthesis; and consequently, no part of a sentence ought to be more distinctly marked in the pointing.

PART VI. From technical terms.

Another source of darkness in composing, is the injudicious introduction of technical words and phrases, as in the following passage:

Tack to the larboard, and stand off to sea,
Veer starboard sea and land-t

What an absurd profusion, in an epic poem too, of terms which few beside seamen understand! In strict propriety, technical words should not be considered as belonging to the language; because not in current use, nor understood by the generality even of readers. They are but the peculiar dialect of a particular class. When those of that class only are addressed, as in treatises on the principles of their art, it is admitted, that the use of such terms may be not only convenient, but even nccessary. It is allowable also in ridicule, if used sparingly, as in comedy and romance.

PART VII.-From long Sentences.

The last cause of obscurity I shall take notice of is, very long sentences. This rarely fails to be conjoined with some of the other faults before mentioned. The two subsequent quotations from two eminent writers, will serve sufficiently to exemplify more than one of them. The first is from Bolingbroke's Philosophy: "are so, contrary to all appearances (for they denote plainly one single system, all the parts of which are so "intimately connected and dependent one on another, "that the whole begins, proceeds, and ends together,)

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+ Dryden's Iliad.

"If we

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